*also side note, I’ve noticed comments aren’t visible on other people’s pages unless they approve them to be put on their post. I’m pretty sure a lot of people’s comments aren’t being posted/seen by others*

Page 1 (above) shows several random scenes in the first couple panels, shown with the bird, window, etc., to set the mood. Then we get a view of the kid sitting on his rocking horse in his room. The whispering sounds are present in the room and he starts rocking back and forth on his rocking horse. As he does, his rocking horse slowly comes to life.

Page 2 (above) shows the kid now riding his horse as his horse has come to life. He directly interacts with the race. As the horse starts building up speed, the whispering sounds become more and more intense. The horse starts breathing hard and so does the kid. The whole entire time, the words become more and more intense and revolves around the word money.

The last page ends showing the horse reaching the finish line. I decided to end it here, rather than bringing him back to his consciousness in his room because I want the reader to decide for themselves what will happen. Technically, the words become more and more and this will keep continuing throughout the story. Even though the horse wins, you are never satisfied and end up wanting to bet on another horse the 2nd and 3rd time around. It’s like a cycle that will keep continuing. That’s why I stopped it here because this won’t just happen to him once, but multiple times throughout the story.