I love that you’ve put your own twist to interpret the story in a way that’s very unique and conceptual!! I think cutting out the elevator scene can work to your advantage because that will allow the reader to focus more on your subtle interpretation of the climax. Your banana fish sketches are the best, so adorable!! I think you are on a great track, good luck with the rest of execution:)
I love that you’ve put your own twist to interpret the story in a way that’s very unique and conceptual!! I think cutting out the elevator scene can work to your advantage because that will allow the reader to focus more on your subtle interpretation of the climax. Your banana fish sketches are the best, so adorable!! I think you are on a great track, good luck with the rest of execution:)